Great quote, wonderful language, very true statement.
But way too long. If Jefferson were true to his words and writing for business today, he'd need to cut it by nearly 30 percent:
And on Twitter, even more editing and a twist would be expected:
Do you get the meaning from each version? Yes.
Is the Twitter version as elegant as Jefferson's original? Absolutely not.
The key is understanding the setting, your audience, and their expectations to make sure you are using exactly the right number of words to get your point across.